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15. Damn These Bones

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Mon Dec 30, 2024, 04:47 PM

Dec 30

I groan and moan
my joints feel like a rusty trombone
damn these bones

I get overworked and my body let's it be known
I feel like I've been through a cyclone
damn these bones

Sometimes I need to postpone
as the pain can be prone
damn these bones

Some days I want to yell into the microphone
I don't want to inhale peoples migraine producing cologne
damn these bones

I need a younger clone
one that can get in the overworked zone
damn these bones

I've been taking lessons from Eminem.

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I inadvertently just wrote a song. It's very short...just one verse. It was written very quickly and effortlessly. [View all] LuckyCharms Dec 29 OP

So sorry this is your IRL reality, LC. OAITW r.2.0 Dec 29 #1

Sorry, post 2 is for you. put it in wrong spot. LuckyCharms Dec 29 #3

If i ever get up there again, I'll look you up! LuckyCharms Dec 29 #2

Bred and born in OOB/Saco/Biddeford...depends who you talked to. OAITW r.2.0 Dec 29 #4

Saco is on the way to Portland via I95 if memory serves? LuckyCharms Dec 29 #5

Indeed, it is, OAITW r.2.0 Dec 29 #6

The alternative True Dough Dec 29 #7

Oh! Tesha Dec 30 #8

That song resonates with me now nuxvomica Dec 30 #9

Whew! Marthe48 Dec 30 #10

Let me know if you need tuba accompaniment... Harker Dec 30 #11

wait till u hear my orchestra peice , its called snap, crakle and groan. AllaN01Bear Dec 30 #12

I can't wait to buy the album! zanana1 Dec 30 #13

I HEAR ya! some_of_us_are_sane Dec 30 #14

Damn These Bones Niagara Dec 30 #15

Holy cow! LuckyCharms Dec 30 #16

I did in fact write that just for you, Lucky! Niagara Dec 30 #17

Well! I'm honored! LuckyCharms Dec 30 #18

Good things come to those that wait Niagara Dec 30 #19

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