Some honest feedback pleaae

[prodigitalson]

This is a song I wrote over a decade ago, made a low quality recording and then basically forgot it until 2018 when I put it on YouTube then forgot it again.

I'm working on a full length album and have been looking at some old stuff to rework.

Any suggestions. with this one?

[GReedDiamond]

1. Love It! Adding drums/percussion would be nice...

...in the process of re-recording the song, if possible.

I get a T-Rex vibe from this, with some uptempo accents.

I hear a simple double-time drums groove with conga-like percussion.

I do remote drum/percussion recording, just in case.

[prodigitalson]

6. Thank you so much

I'm going to start re recording this week. Definitely need some percussion. I'm going to put a bass line on it too Once I get a decent version down with a click track I'll let you know the BPM and send you a copy. If you are offering some rhythm I humbly accept. I'm pretty poor so I can't pay much.

Again. Thank you for your kind words.

[GReedDiamond]

7. Payment not needed...

...it'd be my pleasure and a privilege to contribute to your project.

I'm in the middle of relocating my drums and I'm getting a new computer/daw from a friend, next week, I think.

Hopefully by the time you've re-recorded, I'll be ready to go.

I'd be using my Roland TD20-X electronic drum kit. It has a very natural/acoustic drum sound, so it won't sound like "fake drums."

Here'a an example on YouTube:

[prodigitalson]

8. Perfect 👍

Again thanks!??

[GReedDiamond]

9. When you're ready, just send me a DU message...

...so you know where to send stuff to.

[prodigitalson]

11. Will do

[prodigitalson]

10. Great stuff

Evocative of immediate post Barret Floyd and King Crimson. Love it

[GReedDiamond]

12. That is pretty high praise...

...thanks, I'm humbled.

[padfun]

2. I say, go for it.

The song is very good. Much better than i expected.

I subscribed to your YouTube channel and wish you the best.

[prodigitalson]

5. Awesome thank you.

That's so nice.

[Maraya1969]

3. I actually liked it. It sounded like it would be a great movie track.

[prodigitalson]

4. Thank you so much

I really really appreciate it.